A beautiful poem on first rain.
How beautiful does the world look with the showering rain. You may like or dislike the rain
however everybody feels happy, refreshed and relieved on the first rain.
Some call it tears of God
while others consider it as heeling water droplet's from heaven.
If you feel that rain is magical and beautiful! I will like to share a tiny little poem of mine with you.
Read and Enjoy!
First Rain
The most awaited occasion began
Frogs elicited the rain
clouds thundered like strum
And lightning stroked to welcome.
Rain came drip drip down softly
Trees enjoyed the get together with rain fondly,
the Velvet mites joined the celebration gladly.
Kids ran out to feel the rain,
Tireless Farmers are happy and out of strain.
sand was late but she sprayed a perfume,
I will catch everyone’s attention was what she assumed.
Rivers and lakes filled themselves richly
Rainbow ended the ceremony precisely.
-Welisa D'costa
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Weliss dear its very nice .... .the best is yet to come dear... mgbu... a nice poem with memories 😇😇
ReplyDeleteThank you so much dear.
DeleteGood post. Nice poem. Keep up the good work.
ReplyDeleteSuperb my friend
ReplyDeleteGreat poem 😊❤️
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DeleteAwesome one!🤩
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DeleteIt's beautiful and I loved it. 👍🏻
ReplyDeleteSuch a beautiful poem. Rains are the weather that just changes everything around us and you’ve portrayed it well
ReplyDelete😊 Thank you so much.
DeleteBeautiful poem,my childhood memories reappear, where me and my siblings loves playing and running under the heavy rain.
ReplyDeleteFor me rain is a sign of blessing from above. When it rains, it pours.
😊 Thank you for your beautiful comment, I’m glad that my poem could take you into your good old days of fun and joy........yes definitely rain is a blessing from heaven😊
DeleteWow! Great poem. Loved the fact that you brought out the beauty of rain in such a mesmerizing way. You should however focus on the problems farmers face when there is no rain.... Would love to read more poems from you...
ReplyDeleteThank you so much for your beautiful comment.......I will take your suggestion into consideration and will work on that in my further poems.
DeleteNice one
ReplyDeleteThank you
DeleteYou've got the right words to make me feel I was there
ReplyDeleteThank you so much! 😊
DeleteGreat poem. Thanks for sharing.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much 😊
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